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Where Did Our Love Go Wrong?
Thoughts about a lost love.
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Where Did Our Love Go Wrong?


Where did our love go wrong?
At what point did the scale
tip from ecstasy to despair?

We had so much hope for our future.
At what point did we stop
holding each others hand?

You only had eyes for me.
At which point did those eyes
start looking elsewhere?

If you look deep into my eyes,
you’ll see the embers of my love,
your breath alone can bring to flame.





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