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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1209589  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
"Second Falls"
Childhood vacation spot.
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an afternoon clear
separates early
from a shiftless sky
trampling feet numbered
beat swiftly
down a cabin-lined road
dust-covered sneakers
stride unconcerned
across wooden planks bridged
outpaced steps
cross hurriedly
into a white-spotted meadow
a tracking footpath
winds thin
through partially-timbered woods
a narrow stream
motions deliberate
over closely-spaced rocks
wavering arms slight
balance anxiously
above an exposed pipeline
splashing echoes near
resound fleetingly
in the warming Sierra air
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