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Here is a list I am compiling that I use to help me express emotions when I'm writing. If you have the same habit as me of 'telling' the reader instead of 'showing' the reader then this list may be of some help to you. I have posted my list is here to benefit anyone who finds it useful. If anyone has any suggestions they think should be added, then please drop me a line, so I can add them to the list for the benefit of everyone....Thanks, Kurt. The List... Happy... mouth curve upward upward curl features lightened eyes crinkle - crow's-feet brows lifted wrinkled forehead lip corners stretch sideward lips drew backward brightness Eyes sparkled face lit up teeth flash Eyes dance Eyes: shine, glitter, glisten, flash, flicker, twinkle, glint, shimmer Cheeks burn rosy Crooked smile Little breath Face brightened Face flushed posture... dancing about/spin around clapping hands body relaxed deep breaths threw head back jumping with joy clutching/rubbing hands together threw out arms punch air run around throwing things in air shoulders lifted smile/grin/laugh/cheer/cry Giggle Squeezes self Pinches self Tension eased from muscles ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sad... downcast Blubber/bawl/howl dejected sniffing tearing eyes Tears swelled in eyes Blinking away tears glance downward lips bowed contorted features/face mouth opened close eyes lower jaw/lip quivered nose tiptilted face dropped frown lowered eyelids wrinkled forehead cry/weep/sob Deep sigh Heart heavy Snivel Snuffle Blubber Heave a sigh Mournful eyes Downward turned lips posture... drooping shoulders Mope/sulk Crestfallen bowed-head press temples shake head sunken chest limp body slumped Wave hand (dismissive?) hold head Hunch/sprawl sagging limbs curl up suck thumb cover mouth tremble/shake/shudder Cup chin in hand Racking sobs Wipe away tears Rub sore nose Shove hands in pockets Disconsolate ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Scared... face flushed eyes widened eyelids/eyebrows lifted panting/gasping heart raced Head rushing mouth opened jaw dropped/gapping pupils narrowed brows lifted wrinkled forehead teeth chatter sweat/shiver/cold butterflies crying face paled blood drained from face Color drained from skin Teeth on edge Eyes white with fear Eyes rolling Whispered prayers or curses Voice broke Wheeze/stutter Stammer posture... drawing back Fidget jump raising arms cover/hide face shaking/tremble knees folded palms folded falter Squirm curl in a ball fettle position Collapse Shiver/quake/Tremor clench fists uncontrollable spasm tremble/shake stumbled head wobbled Cringe/shrink/recoil cower shudder knees give way neck hairs raise nauseous/vomiting pass wind (Lesley's suggestion) wet yourself (Jayde's suggestion) Chill bumps on skin Hair standing on end Clutches self Clammy skin Cold sweat ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Angry... bared-teeth Smoldered intense stare flared nostrils eyes narrowed eyebrows draw together eyelids drew together flushed cheeks Blushing deep red wrinkled nose neck reddened lips thinned jaw line pulsed jaw muscles twitched/trembled throbbing veins grind teeth Clench jaw rigid throat bite down/finger draw breath/inhale Face tightened scowl Glower Snarl Growl Bellow Puff Face burning Harder voice Smile: curved, warped, twisted posture... aggressive stance Seize clench/wave fist Trembling hands stiffened/tighten muscles shaking arms upward punch air stamp foot snort/huff kicking agitated Sharp footsteps thumping fist lashing out/throwing dropping to knees flinch/tremble pacing cry out scream mumbling Lash out Bunch fists Curl fists Hammer at tap foot/fold arms pull own hair strangle on a scream shriek ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Confused... blank expression frown eyebrows lowered/drew together gaze downward eyes narrowed tongue protruding Biting tongue mouth opened lips to one side sigh/blow/exhale squeeze lips together pursed lips Mumble Mutter Screw up face in thought Cock one eye up Slatted eyes Lift of chin Puckered/wrinkled/knit brow posture... shaking/scratch head Tilted head Rub back of neck Focused/precise movements finger to chin/mouth pull head back lean backwards blank stare Fidget shrug shoulders hand over mouth rub face hand on head hold out palms cock head hands on hips tap foot Hunker down Shrug ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Surprised... open-mouthed jaw dropped/gapped eyes widened pupils narrowed eyelids raised brows lifted nose/nostrils flared face flushed tongue protruding fluttering eyelashes flickering eyebrows wrinkled forehead gasp/pant/inhale Sharp intake of breath jaw tensed Exclaim brows fly up on head Open mouth Cried out posture... step/draw backwards jump put hands to mouth raise arms grasp cheeks hold hands to chest cover mouth bite together/finger(s) flinch/wince/tremble/shake cower yell/cry/scream Clasps hands before chin Slaps own face with one or both hands ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Excited... exhilaration panting/gasping eyes widened smile/grin/laugh lips curled cheeks lifted flushing red face/neck pant deep/short breath gape/drool Dancing eyes Eyes over-bright Tongue flicks over lips Heart quickened Tingling on skin posture... dancing about clapping/rubbing hands clutching head/hands together Hop/skip jumping around cover face punching air bobbing up and down slapping thigh shaking fists biting finger/grit teeth running on spot cartwheel reach into the air cry/yell/scream/squeak/shriek wringing their hands Bounces on toes Rocks on heels Feels faint Swoons Holds breath ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Pain... face contract in a grimacing smile face crumpled veins bulging grit teeth closed eyes eyes glazed eyes watered flared nostrils reddened face/features bite lip neck widened curse gasp/pant Licks parched lips Grunts Groans Moans Cries out Weeps Pleads Delirium Tosses head from side to side Ragged breath Face clenched posture... muscles tightened involuntary spasm ridged/tense arched back reaching clenched fists shiver/tremble fitting/flinch thrash nauseous/vomiting Strains Limps Hobbles Stumbles ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Emotion List... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Negative & forceful... Anger Annoyance Contempt Disgust Irritation Negative & not in control... Anxiety Embarrassment Fear Helplessness Powerlessness Worry Negative thoughts... Doubt Envy Frustration Guilt Shame Negative & passive... Boredom Despair Disappointment Hurt Sadness Agitation Shock Stress Tension -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Positive & lively... Laugh Amusement Delight Elation Excitement Happiness Joy Pleasure Caring Affection Empathy Friendliness Love Positive thoughts... Courage Hope Pride Satisfaction Trust Quiet positive... Calm Content Relaxed Relieved Serene Reactive Interest Politeness Surprise
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