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 Last goodbye Rated:
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 dealing with the death of a loved one. third place in the emotional poetry contest.
by: donnieg View donnieg's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: donnieg [Offline / Private] Avg Rating: (3)  
I live my life day by day,
Always looking for a better way.
I'm always considering what to do,
How to live my life without you.
I was the body, you were the soul,
Until that night you had to go.
We had such a wonderful life together.
It's so hard to release the tether.
I held you close and kissed your lips.
I watched helpless, as your life began to slip.
I held your hand and kissed you face.
All those doctors, what a waste.
I knew that it wouldn't be long,
Till, I was left without you, all alone.
You opened your eyes and said with a smile,
'Hold me tight while I walk my final mile.'
I held you in our loving way.
You closed your eyes and slipped away.
I know everyone has to die.
It's just so hard to say that last goodbye.

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