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Dancing with No Shoes
Poetry forms entry, gypsy dancing. 1st attempt at structured poetry.
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Their soft bare feet assaulting the clearing,
Onlookers watching, keeping time with their toes,
Their soft uttered gasps, joy to the hearing.
Cheering and joyful, in such happy throes.

Onlookers watching, keeping time with their toes,
Feet flashing, smiles bright, hair whipping carefree,
Cheering and joyful, in such happy throes.
They all join in dancing, gypsy decree.

Feet flashing, smiles bright, hair whipping carefree,
Their soft uttered gasps, joy to the hearing.
They all join in dancing, gypsy decree,
their soft bare feet assaulting the clearing.


Written for poetry forms contest. Style of poem: Pantoum
Prompt (not necessary) title: Dancing with no Shoes
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