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  >> Static Item >> Critique >> Emotional >> ID #1265579  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Two
About a man and what he has become
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One sat on the bench
But two were there all the same

Trapped inside another
It wanted to jump out and scream

What have you done to me
I used to be great

My dreams
My desires
My hopes
My loves

You took them away
And wont give them back

So sit there new man
Waste away
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