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  >> Static Item >> Short Story >> Friendship >> ID #1266120  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Love You
A girl remembers a loved one
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Nicole suddenly looked up from Detective McCauley. She sees Billy smiling at her and shyly returns a smile, not wanting the detective to see. Nicole remembers that night Billy first said "I love you" as she moves closer to him. She leans in to him. Detective McCauley gently calls Nicole back to reality just as her lips touch the glass. She bursts into tears as she faces Billy's picture to the wall. She returns to the detective, takes a deep breath, and continues -- distraction free --her heartbreaking story of just how much Billy loved her.   
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