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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Drama >> ID #1283404  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
I Loved You
Poem about a break up
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You said you loved me,
It made me smile,
Now we're apart,
Drowning in denile.
There is a lifeguard,
And he saved you,
But I'm still drowning,
I never thought I'd lose.

Still looking for my lifeguard,
Whilst he gives you mouth to mouth,
Never felt so torn,
Never been filled with doubt.
And I saw here,
She walked down the hall,
And you left my mind,
In a plummeting fall.

We are happier together,
Than you and I were,
And your lifeguard drops you,
Your mind begins to whir.
You knock on my front door,
When I answere your heart hovered,
You asked me back,
I said, "I loved you and its over."
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