Believable Fiction Showing May 2007

Elements of Believable Fiction
May 2007





A.) Exercise 2

1.) The man is nervous.

Answer: The broad shoulders were changeable with each passing second. He fidgeted from one leg to the other as a hand rubbed with discontent across his brows to towel off the beads of perspiration from the unsettlement inside of him.

2.) The lawn has been mown and recently trimmed.

Answer: The agriculture glowed after the progress of improving the lawn by sprucing it up in the near future.

3.) The student is ready for the final bell of the day to ring.

Answer: A scholar is having expectations of the last indication, letting all in the knowledge of the terminal point that glows with surging masses.

4.) The larger of the two dogs is arrogant.

Answer: It was ying and yang in the backyard. An immensely canine of the cluster demonstrated his magnitude of presumptuousness towards the peewee foremost part in the combination of all breeds.






B.) Exercise 3

1.) Sunsets are nice at the beach.

Answer: The eventides bounce magnificently off the glistening sand better than anywhere experienced.

2.) A housewife’s work is never done.

Answer: A lady of the house profession at no time concludes until Day of Judgment.

3.) He had never looked closely at his father-in-law.

Answer: The chap had maneuvered around the older man that had become his father-in-law in another grace that was extraneous to him.

4.) It seemed that the mail would never come.

Answer: The period made the emotional sensation of at no time linger eternally that the communications would nevermore darken the landmass of ones entrance.