Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Reviewer Items

More Reviewers  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Mentor
Presented To:
mars

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 293    
Guests: 4836    

   
Total Online Now: 5129    
Writing.Com Time

Thursday
May 31, 2012
2:41am EDT


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1293335  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
The Valley of Dreams
My first attempt at using Monchielle style.
Rated:
E
by
This item requires reviews with ratings.
The  Monchielle poem contains four stanzas
Each stanza has five lines.
Every line has six syllables
Every first line is repeated and comes back as the first line of all the other stanzas.
Line three and five rhyme in every stanza.
The rhyme scheme: Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml


A Valley of Dreams

In my valley of dreams
There is verdant green life
Beneath azure blue skies
With peace everlasting
Found in love’s boundless ties

In my valley of dreams
I am free of the stress
Infidelity brings
Knowing such a freedom
Lifts my heart as it sings

In my valley of dreams
There is children’s laughter
Healthy, happy and whole
A mother’s fondest dream
That abounds from her soul


In my valley of dreams
I’m lacking for nothing
I have comfort and home
I know true happiness
No more reasons to roam



© Copyright 2007 Sultry Enchantress (UN: sultry at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Sultry Enchantress has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!