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WHISPERING WATER SONG
The answer is deep in the soul. Written for Stormys Newsletter and Contest
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WHISPERING WATER SONG

Listen to the whispering song
that the slow flowing water makes,
as it winds on down the hillside
into the little mountain lake.
~
I wade along the sandy shore
wanting to cool off and get wet,
then with that lacey willow tree
it’s a perfect picture that’s set.
~
I’ll whistle because I’m happy
as I look into this deep hole,
where mother nature has created
another window to my soul.
~
Looking deep into that window,
the swirling bottomless abyss
and you’re the one -- the face I see,
with memories of your sweet kiss.
~
Now one more time I am wondering
why that time in our lives went wrong.
my heart is no longer happy,
from my lips sounds no whistle song.
~
Water falls from this mountain lake
like thunder, no whispering song.
My mind is struck as by lightning
now know blame was mine all along

7/21/07



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