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RORIE'S POETRY.
ABOUT MY DOLL ELIZABETH I was at my Grandma's house for a couple of weeks. One day she gave me this beautiful doll. Her name is Elizabeth. She looks like me with her brown eyes and long hair. ABOUT MY UNICORN "PINK STAR" My Unicorn is a pure white pony. She has a pink mane And a beautiful silver horn. She's soft and snuggly. She has magic powers. She can fly without wings.{ Created: 8/11/07 ![]() LOVE SONG Roses are red. Violets are blue. I think I fell in love with you. You are so sweet you are so kind. Oh gee I wish you where mine. You can be mine. I can be yours. We can be teachers some day. I love you. You love me. Wow oh Wow. THIS IS ME This is me. Who I am. Now I know what I am. Save me. I need to be saved. Send my heart to the moon. Let the moon give me life. I'm as happy can be. You and I are now saved. We are meant to be. Song written July 13, 2008 _____________________________________________________________________________________________ FRIENDS Friends we are Just friends We hug and hug We play and play Yet no fights Friends are like brothers or sisters We grow up together We work together We also die together ![]() Rain It is cold and clear. Wettest weather of all times. Sometimes it drizzles Sometimes it pours. Only one way to know if it is going to rain. Big giant gray cloud. That is what you should see. Clouds.Not any old cloud that is white. A gray cloud, that is all there is to it. No light or skys of blue just water and gray skys. THE END. THANK YOU FOR READING THIS POEM! let no rain fall on you. FAMILY family family they love you family family moms,dads,cousins too family family sisters,brothers,aunts and uncles family family grandma, grandpa you can't forget family family your never to old to hang with family ANIMALS woof woof, goes a dog meow meow, goes a cat piter pater, goes a mouse nibble nibble, goes a bunny good sniffer, gigy gigs good sight, in the night chester good hearing, despereaux perfect weight, fidget(aka)bunbun Tin Man I have no heart to give No heart to take No heart to love No heart to break January 15, 2011 SNOW Mmmm Mmmm, snow snow falls all day blizards aren't fun there's a tree in the back yard it leans as if it was going to fall and there are animal prints in the snow and a print that looks like a heart eat eat fun fun every day in the snow, it looks like a giant cake there's a carnival ride but wait your turn the umbrella people are on them right now tweet birds are still here so we still have summer spirit yes, no school I'm so excited no math homework we're at my grandparent's house and no snow suit so I can't play outside i'm nowhere near my friends at least my grandparents have really cool games- I can't wait for summer I get to go swimming in the pool, get to go to camp- it's the place to be Created: February, 2010 PFC Paradise farm camp is the place to be we'll have fun just you and me team building archery so much fun please come with me Monday to Friday have a bbq someday over there maybe I'll meet you ![]() Pink Bow pink bow pink bow your so sweet! pink bow pink bow your my treat! before bed i see you at night, oh such a wonderful sight! your nickname is patches cause that what you are i love you so much because your not bizarre! February 13,2011 ______________________________________________________________________ Very Special Messages Rorie decided to keep: Well look at that confident, beautiful young lady. Isn't she just a doll! This is a wonderful idea to highlight her writing. Hello Rorie ! It's hard to choose a favorite but I think I will have to go with "About my Unicorn 'Pink Star'." Your description was beautiful. I could picture your unicorn clearly in my mind. I bet he is very special. My second favorite would be your song "This is me". I loved the idea of sending a heart to the moon. What a beautiful and exciting thought, Great job. To celebrate your writing, I made you something today. You inspired me! I hope you enjoy it. Keep writing! I look forward to reading it. Brooke ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello Rorie ! I love how you tell us about your beautiful doll who looks just like you, and also about your Pink Unicorn Star, and it looks just beautiful on you....I am sure that you will have a lot to tell your sisters and your friends about what a great time you had writing, so that your new friends will have something to read when they come to visit your grandma's port.....Well I hope you're having a great time and I look forward to reading more of your stories very soon. Love, Marlena (Marlena sent Rorie a beautiful pink ribbon} Message from Jeaz : anonymously special Beautiful....Great job on your writing, Rorie. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
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