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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1306405  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Naked as I am
This is a piece that i just recently wrote.
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I'm so glad that you are ready to share in my nakedness;
I must confess that I couldn't wait for this opportunity to get undressed.

Don't get me wrong it wasn't, because sex was the only thing on my mind;
It's just that clothes tend to hide my wonderfully naked design.

As I stood there naked as I am before you I was ready to please;
I could tell you were getting excited with every breath that you would breathe.

I knew that you were awaiting the moment that I would invade your privacy;
So I just took it slow, because I wanted you to feel, and enjoy all of me.

Feeling my touch, and my cool breath upon your soft sweet skin;
I could hear your body begging for me to enter in.

As our bodies began to connect,and do there own things;
I wondered what else could this erotic night bring?
Now as we lay there our hearts still beats uncontrollably fast;
Our naked bodies are hot, and wet from the erotic blast.

I to thought that it was over as we lay there in the after glow;
But my soldier was still at attention throbbing , and ready to go.

As I ventured deep into the path of your exotic,and pleasurable inner core;
I felt your nails deep in my skin as my flesh they tore.

At that time my spine stifted, and I felt a jolt;
realizing that it was just my own lightning bolt.

With satisfying sighs we just lay there in our naked.
Letting our minds wonder feeling free in our naked.

Yes I am naked. Naked as I want to be.
Naked as I am just you, and me.

 
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