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Taunted by some older neighborhood boys,
my brother Brodie and I took up the gauntlet and agreed to spend a night in an old house said to be haunted by spirits of the ancient family Strauss. Rumors of their diabolical behavior ran rampant through the village, claiming they were agents of Satan. On the appointed night, under Saturn’s influence, the full moon silhouetted the old gabled chateau high on the hill, overlooking the grey and melancholy waters of the ocean with thunderclouds billowing in the west. Critters scurried into the brush as we crept along the path of broken stepping-stones, overgrown with moss and weeds, leading to the main entrance. The rotting wooden door creaked on its rusty hinges as we pushed it open and were soon accosted by the pervasive pungent odor of mold while we waded through a mass of cobwebs. Moonbeams streaming through broken windows painted grotesque patterns on the floor and walls. The bulging whites of Brodie’s eyes were also visible when we heard shuffling sounds on the second floor. Then there was the clanking sound of chains. The pallor on his face portrayed stark terror. The shadowy figure of a man with demonic features emerged into the moonlight. When the phantom spirit started toward us, we could hear it uttering epithets in some ancient tongue. We both did a sharp pirouette and made a rapid escape. After all, everyone knows that discretion is the better part of valor.
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