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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Relationship >> ID #134304  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Music to my ears.
What I felt the moment I knew I loved her.
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As the future unfolds, I hear the music of an unwritten score. I ponder these notes as their vibrations drill to my inner core. A tear wells up from within to wiggle its way out, which I am caught totally by surprise for not knowing about.

As my emotions awake, slowly at first, I noticed this pain and an unquenchable thirst.

Then without warning, they tripled, and then quadrupled in size. It happened so quickly; you could see it in my eyes. I struggled and fought, but the forces of nature where too strong to hold back. I burst outwards in tears hoping no one would see, but totally surprised to see you starting back at me.

What does she see as she gazes at me? Is it a mirror reflection, or some imperfection? Know that I am human and come with some flaws, for no diamond is perfect, but my heart will forever be yours.

I love you.

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