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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1349360  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Frozen Eyes
A very abstract view of a troubled relationship.
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Murky, misty, cold and dry;
Frosted, opaque, shut off inside.
Scratching the surface... the light that's dancing....
That shadow of you, a deep dark shade.

The colours of you, I'm not sure they exist;
Ironic it is, you're none on that list-
Monotone, hollow;
A white-washed fall.
A deep ravine's monotonous call.

All these silky, solemn winds that flow,
Supple waters, so still and shallow;
A sorrow lake: soiled and spilt;
From all your epic spouts of guilt.

Metal Faces masked in disguise.
Stifled within a frozen guise.
Courteous they are, all shattered and scarred.....

It's blissful oblivion better from here.
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