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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Tragedy >> ID #1349662  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Tears From Above
Many obstacles in our way. Difficult realtionships.
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Shards of metal, disturbing my heart..
Shattered diamonds from afar.

If you only knew, the pain that this is causing me!
Don’t play it this way;
You’re just pushing me away.

I hate this awkwardness.
These rigid glitches like a blot in the stars.

Tears from above light up the sky
Just as they do within my eyes.
With every drop, a piece of me is washed away...

It was yet another fantasy...
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