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In My World
I am only human-- Having my own scopes and limitations The same as a free bird-- Not wanting any restrictions I met you And the pieces of the puzzle felt solved I love you Around you, my world forever revolved Still I'm only human A girl without a freedom of choice I was locked up inside And they took away my voice And now as I stay here-- In this so-called castle, built with limpid lies I write this note to you-- Containing the truth found in my eyes I hope it will reach you Before I say goodbye to this world of pain I will go to a world filled with peppermint It's wonderful smell will mix with the rain And in that world I will be free You and I will be together The red thread of fate will turn crimson As our love continues forever Yet all these are dreams They will never come true no matter what I do For eternity, I will lay in slumber As this white rose withers, I'll still have memories of you I don't really like this poem as much as I did when I first wrote it... So, I put this on "Private" for a while and decided I'll edit it and turn it into something I will like, again. It's 11:51 PM here, and I finished editing/re-writing a couple of minutes ago. The edited version though, turned out to be COMPLETELY different to this one. It feels more like a NEW composition with the same title... So, I figured I'll put this one up again as "Public", and take it off my portfolio permanently in a few days, or at least once reviews for the "other" one come in.
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