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Inside Of Me
A first draft of a song I've just written. Any suggestions would be appreciated
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Inside Of Me

I walk alone
In this society,
There's something Dead
And it's inside of me.

We were so in love
Now that cannot be,
'Cos when you walked away
You took it all from me!

Do you only see what's wrong or right?
Do you turn away when we start to fight?
Do you close your mind when we disagree?
Do you hear at all? Or do you turn and flee?

A silent pain
That people cannot see,
There's something dead
And it's inside of me.

I reach for help
I'm living my nightmares,
Trapped in a world
Where no-one really cares.

You can only see what's wrong or right.
You always turn away when we start to fight.
You just closed your mind when you disagreed.
You don't hear at all, you just turn and flee.

A heavy burden
That I must carry,
There's something dead
It could soon be me.

Emotions racing
Fears I cannot hide,
I can't take no more
It's time for suicide.

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