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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Emotional >> ID #1387698  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
" MIDNIGHT IN PARADISE "
The feeling of total awe for someone
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The night we met
is embedded in my mind
you were
everything I needed you to be
and, more
When you...
laid me down at your feet
And...
kissed me gently
your lips so soft and inviting
took me to a whole new level
than I was used too
When you...
laid down beside me
you enticed me
caressing me entirely
with your effervescence
I melted
And...
my heart fluttered
as gently as
the wings of a dove
I love...
the way you touch me
executing mutual emotions
passionately embracing
a scent of mystery
that glistens in the air
dancing in the wind
When you...
look at me
I tremble inside
realizing that I
had fallen for you hard
so hard
trying to
tell you how I feel
that what I feel for you
is real
the night we met
was like...
Midnight In Paradise

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