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First to Fall
chase the season? here's a better reason
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         First to Fall

the cold wind blows the leaves away
to warn of turning of the season
and if you ask I could not say
this autumn visit's ulterior reason

this may seem like romantic betting
risking in one moment to lose it all
but if cuddling only leads to sweating
then let me be the first to fall
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