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You and Me
a Monotetra for Stretch Your Style...
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You and Me


Trapped within a world of sadness.
Nothing else around but darkness.
All the tears I cried are countless.
This is madness, this is madness.

It’s all because we’re now apart,
that I know not, just how to start.
And all that is left, in my part---
a frozen heart, a frozen heart.

Everything has turned black and white.
I wonder if I’ll be all right,
when there’s nothing else but the night.
You were my light, you were my light.

I thought it would be you and me.
But it happened, a tragedy.
Still I’m yours, though there’s no more we.
Permanently, permanently…




The Monotetra is a form that consist of four lines, each line ending mono-rhyme.
Each line has a syllable count of eight or four metric feet.
To give the form a more profound and distinct effect the last line is written
in two metric feet or four syllables then repeated.
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