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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Action/Adventure >> ID #1407967  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Shut Eyes
Did this for my creative writing class.
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Unraveling mind
Sporadically wanders
Through life, time, existence beyond
Exuberant colors

Vessels sail my inner thoughts
In altitudes hazy and cold
Some sink with electric charge

With thickening rhythms
Chambers of my unconscious explode

Wrapping my thoughts in a deep abyss
The images are not truly concise
A fragment of what was taught to me today
Slowly decomposed holes to my sight

In the empty space
Visions of a supernova are vast
Complex designs surround

Everything seems weightless
Waves of infinity floating around

Flashing images fast with motion
Whose coordinates start to deflect
Impulses constantly change
Charges of lightning reflect

Pulling these visions like magnetic chains
No effort, ideas swarm with torpedos
Flowing in a mind that tries to refrain

How my faded illusions flourish
Washing up ashore my concepts and beliefs
My submerged mind wakes up slowly
A shipwrecked sailor on a stormy sea

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