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I hear your wicked taunt and still you haunt
My mind. Your bitter lies can grip and sting Me even now and I have cried: ‘Oh how Can I have loved?' It didn't mean a thing. The storm of life will pass and so will strife They say. But when? The rain beats down on me: Eternal tears from darkened clouds--my fears. I'm trapped; my shadowed mind cannot pull free. And now I know I barely cope. My hope Is like a candle flame, blown out by you. The pain is all too much and under strain I break. I should have known you'd be untrue. Form: Triquatrain. Rhyme scheme: aa (internal rhyme), b, cc (internal rhyme), b Element: Metaphor. Optional Prompt: 'Weather events can be glorious and deadly. Think about some weather event that strikes vividly with you: Rainstorms, sun dogs, rainbows, hurricanes, etc.'
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