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Content Rating Notice: XGC -- May Contain Extreme Graphic Content
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Learning the Native Tongue
Learn a new language- it's good for you! For the Weekly Quickie, desert island prompt!
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Learning the Native Tongue
By Angelina Page

         Seeing no other boats, Eva and I stripped off our bathing suits to thwart tan lines. We had traveled to a deserted chunk of Puerto Rican paradise- one of a few small islas separated from the mainland that were too small for habitation but perfect for a picnic or day hike. We washed papayas down with sweet rum and let gentle waves spray onto our sandy bodies.

         "Let's take a walk," Eva gestured to the blooming flora past the beach.

         "I don't think we're dressed for that!" I laughed.

         "We won't go in far. These islands have rare native animales! Vamos!"
         
        I was unsure about this naked adventure into the jungle, but Eva gave me puppy dogs eyes with a high pitched "Por Favor?" and I conceded.

         Brightly colored flowers and birds greeted us in the humid vegetation. It was something out of a Discovery Channel special, and I thanked Eva for convincing me- until we heard some strange sounds in the brush.

         "What the hell is that?" I looked around uneasily.

         "Yo no se..."

         We heard the sound again, a whoosh! that seemed to echo all around us. I backed into a tree only to hear another unsettling noise - the hissing of a large snake as it slithered down the trunk, clearly unhappy with me for disturbing it. It opened it's mouth threateningly and Eva screamed.

         "Holy shit! I'm going to die naked on a deserted island!"  Before I could continue blubbering, the whooshing sound came again. A machete sliced through the snake's neck as Eva and I fell down screaming hysterically.

         When I opened my eyes I saw a bare-chested man helping Eva from the ground. He was dark and muscular and I breathed in sharply as he turned his hand to mine. His eyes were kind and concerned as he started speaking quickly in Spanish.

         "What's he saying?"

         "He wants to know if we are ok. Si," She giggled. "He says it's not every day he saves beautiful naked women!"

         "It's not every day I get saved! Gracias, right? - Eva, tell him we're really thankful and, uh-"

         "Let's tell him in a language we all understand," she said with a smirk.

         Eva kissed the stranger on the lips. He seemed surprised at first but closed his eyes and moaned with pleasure. He tossed the blade to the ground and put his arms around her bare body. A tingling sensation went through me as I watched their embrace. Nervously I put a hand on Eva's shoulder. She turned to me and pressed her lips to mine while the stranger ran a hand from my arm to my ass, squeezing the sand covered flesh he found. Eva's rum flavored tongue danced in my mouth and my moist pussy shuddered with anticipation.

         Playing with my breasts, Eva guided me until we were both on our knees. The stranger's cock was thick and hard; we took turns licking and sucking it. Our tongues played along the shaft; every time they touched I groaned in delight. Eva giggled and pinched my oiled nipples as the stranger whispered passionately in Spanish. I bent down, burying my mouth in her hot honey pot.

         The stranger's fingers searched my soaked hole while I lapped at Eva's twitching clit.

         "Tell him to fuck me!" I implored her while I touched her dripping lips. She gasped something in Spanish and the stranger removed his dick from Eva's mouth, her sweet saliva running down to his scrotum. It slid easily into my snug snatch while my digits felt for Eva's G-Spot - I knew I found it when she started shouting;

         "Ay, Si!  No pare, por favor!"

         The stranger groaned heavily and clutched my hips as his rhythm intensified. I could feel my pussy convulse with climax and I cried out, a cue to the others that they could give in to their desire as well. Our wild noises echoed through our private island getaway and we fell to the soft sand breathlessly.

         "Rare native animales, huh?" I whispered to Eva.

         "Let's explore a little more, si?" She smiled.

         "Si!" I laughed and took her mouth into mine.



Should be a 690 word count not including the title and author name!
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