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They oohed and aahed While hands itching to touch Reached out and were Told "no" with reproach- "So real" they whispered Still wishing to grasp The smallest piece Of such obvious strength- "So strong" was a comment Heard around the room While they stared up In mute awe and respect- "It must stand alone" Intoned the informer Nodding at marble And granite and steel- "Never needs to be touched" She continued to speak As a small boy darted forth From the crowd- A small chubby hand Eagerly reached and Finally touched the Tall granite so strong- He hit it just right Where the marble Was soft and the Steel couldn't hold it Enough- The crack was small and The sound so minute That the crowd moved Along unaware- When a deafening, thundering Crash echoed out from The room where it once Stood alone- Eyes round with surprise froze at the sight Of smoky dust Billowing out from that room- Eventually one agrieved voice Echoed out and uttered A simple remark- "No support." This poem is an analogy. If you read it let me know what you found inside this little story. There are layers.
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