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Lesson 5 - Scene Charts
Expanded Scene Chart for Prologue thru Chapter 1
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Scene Chart/Lesson 5/Novel I



Chapter Scene POV Event

Prologue 1 3rd Opens with Abbas the white wizard surveying the island Fleghorn; Focuses with X-ray vision on band of 8 naked humans dwelling in a cave

Prologue 2 3rd In back of cave a man dies ; Other 7 eat his dead flesh - are cannibals; From paintings on wall of people they ate Abbas determines this is all that's left of a large colony

Prologue 3 3rd "Messenger (Angel) Pole ""juices"" substance in humans that keep them alive from a dying man 400 years later; Emmer collects ""Life Stream"" liquid in 5 flasks; Pole gives ""Life Stream"" flasks to courier to take to Central Bank which stores the solution"

Prologue 4 3rd Soul Collector collects soul and sends off-planet to be with Abbas; Human tissue and bone disintegrate into powder

Prologue 5 3rd "Blackhound (dark wizard) arrives on Fleghorn - Contaminates source of ""Life Stream"" by casting a curse on it"


Chapter 1 1 3rd Fiston (protagonist) is dragged into a pre-op cell against his will by demon; paralyzed by touch from demon's magical baton

Chapter 1 2 Narrator "Fiston the gambler owes too much debt to loan sharks; Describes role of ""Life Stream"" in society"

Chapter 1 3 3rd "Crump prepped to be ""juiced""; Liquid drawn from his brain - paralysis doesn't block this pain -- Tells permanent effects of being ""juiced"" live; through brain - lowers intelligence"

Chapter 1 4 3rd Crump informed that this was only half of the sentence he had been ordered to receive

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