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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1425683  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
How Does It Feel?
Look around you... you have much more than you think.
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How does it feel to have a family?
To be full after every meal?
To be loved and fed...
How does it feel?

How does it feel have good looks?
To have such sex appeal?
For them to fall for you...
How does it feel?

How does it feel to be happy?
In a relationship so real?
With kids... so committed...
How does it feel?

Do you realize your luck?
You've had a good deal.
I drew the short straw...
So how does it feel?

It feels like emptiness,
Of which will never heal.
My heart is in pieces,
Too painful to conceal.

Be mindful what you have
While I have fallen ill...
So tell me Lucky Ones,
How does it feel?
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