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Seperation
Very short story for the 'Amazing 55 Word Story Contest'.
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She knew it was coming. It hurts like she didn't. He leaves her the house like a peace offering, going to his new lover, his new life. She stands at the door, watching the rain plaster his clothes to his skin. When he turns, his eyes are sad and spiteful. "Forever is a long time."
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