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PLOT -
Did it make sense? Did the chapter flow or was it choppy? Did anything stand out that needs clarification? Point out anything you feel necessary.
SETTING -
Could you picture the scene in your mind? Could you taste, touch and feel with the characters? What would you suggest to enhance the scene and make it come alive?
CHARACTERS -
Were they believable? What didn't you like, or did you like about them that stood out?
GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE -
Point out anything you notice. Was the dialogue believeable? In tune with each character?
MY POV -
An overall opinion of what you've read.For book chapters - Would you read more of this story? Why or why not?
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