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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Nature >> ID #1459524  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
In this Garden
Written in the Ae Freslighe poetry style, trying to cope with the need to belong
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In this garden arable,
Petunias rampant growing,
Empty, hardly bearable,
One patch of earth is showing.

Sew a flower tropical
In fertile soil uncovered.
Marvelous and topical,
This beauty rediscovered.

Breathy gusts toss narcissist
Heads, displaying their petals.
Withered seedlings coexist-
Not one among them settles.

Brave, defying gravity,
Brilliant petals now extend,
Furnishing a cavity.
Sweet fragrence will not offend.

Wise petunias acquiesce
To ask at last a pardon,
Save the name with politesse
Of the arable garden.



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Contest Prompt
Just for any who are interested, the Ae Freslighe uses a very strict format: seven syllables to a line, arranged in quartets, odd line numbers ending in a three-syllable word and even numbers in two-syllables, with the rhyming scheme ABAB CDCD etc. Thank you to Sandi_C for finding all this out!
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