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IRREPLACEABLE
He told me to follow my heart. He told me we would never part. But was it a lie from the start? I'm torn apart, I'm torn apart. He said he would not ever lie. He said he would not make me cry. But it was all a worthless try. I want to die, I want to die. She came and your heart was stolen. Now, my eyes are red and swollen. Please don't go, fix me, I'm broken. I'm crestfallen, I'm crestfallen. I tried to forget and change me. I tried my best relentlessly. But each time, I failed, you see. Remarkably, remarkably... The Monotetra is a form that consist of four lines, each line ending mono-rhyme. Each line has a syllable count of eight or four metric feet. To give the form a more profound and distinct effect the last line is written in two metric feet or four syllables then repeated.
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