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  >> Static Item >> Short Story >> Fantasy >> ID #1462237  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Acorns
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        "The first acorn was Adam. He was God's first son and had no
        mother or belly button. He was born of mud and the breath of
        his Father, The Great Spirit. . God was not a mother to Adam
        and did not know his desires. 'I shall reveal to you the secret
        of life.' said the Serpent, 'It is delight in the beauty of lawlessness.
        Your Father wishes to keep you as a slave. But, you are not
        a slave.'

              God warned Adam about the Tree of Knowledge, 'It's fruit is
        poison. It's promise death.' . .. Adam fearing death asked that
        his help mate taste of the fruit. Her name was Eve. Eve had no
        mother. Eve was fashioned from Adam's rib. She was Adam's
        obedient sister.

              The Serpent was slender and delightful to Eve's eye. She
        ate of the Fruit of Knowledge the Serpent offered. It was bitter, but
        she did not die.. Adam, therefore, reached out and took the fruit..
        God forsaken, they saw years of their life with a heavy heart.+
        They sought to be free, but desired the love of their Father.

              God spoke a curse upon his son and daughter for their
        challenge to His Throne, 'Adam, since you have followed the
        Word of Eve; you have chosen a river of blood. Whereas I offered
        my love freely, now you must beg for my love with bloody sacrifice.'
        This is the river that flows from Eden.

              The Serpent defied God, 'They are there own masters and shall
        enjoy their pleasures and misfortunes.' The Great Spirit overtook the
        Serpent and tossed him to the ground. 'I am the thunder and the rising
        sun. I make alive and I will put an end to this Paradice.' God spoke with
        fire and drove His children into the wilderness.

              Eve cryed out for mercy, 'Good conscience, thou hast loved me,
        do not abandon your children.' God held his hand, 'Thou haste
        foresaken me, but I will give you a new son. He will love me as you
        could never love. For this reason will I spare your life.'

              The Angels instructed Adam to till the land and make blood
        sacrifice with a red heafer placed upon a pyre. God spoke to Adam
        through the Angels. He did not trust His son and guarded the
        Tree of Life, 'Lest Adam become like us.'"





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