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The Betrayal
55 word story story entry and writer cramp entry
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SLAM!

“He gone and I glad,” I cry to Teddy.

I look at my other friend.

"Why you not wake me up? I run. Hide. Why you not make me disappear?
He hurt me.  I bleeding. You ‘pose help little ones. YOU PROMISE. I HATE YOU!"
"Take that!"

Oooomph! I throw Teddy at Jesus’ picture.


word count 55
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