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Parallax
A man who walks the tracks singing. He was killed. From Bottle in the River.
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Parallax

A huge man with a high-pitched voice
walked singing down by the tracks,
but we took the road as we feared the noise
of dogs in cul-de-sacs.

The road was heartless on our poise,
holding worlds on our backs.
But thanks to timing! Three convoys
in a train went down the tracks.

We breathed relief and felt rejoice,
we dropped our gunnysacks.
Our friendships we would now enjoy
as we drank our cognacs.

We missed the distant strange high voice
as we all began to relax.
But nothing was done, we had no choice
but to wait while we ate our snacks.

We pondered his lot, was it by his choice?
To lay down the battle-ax?
Or did he run around unemployed,
mad at the corporate attacks?

Did he live in a simple kind of joy
unlike the melancholiacs?
Or better yet, did he try to toy
with the ways of the amnesiacs?

We’d never know his lonely ploy
'cause we lacked the pertinent facts.
And the road drove onward beyond the noise
of the train going down the tracks,

and though we wanted, we had no choice
but to walk past this anticlimax,
of the huge man with the high-pitched voice—
who lay still—
down by the tracks.
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