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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1470072  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Oh you foolish soule.
Oh you foolish soul.
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Oh you foolish sole.
What have you done? You have brought up your darkness and shut out the sun
That poisonous love you offered so freely fell upon loving eyes that became suddenly steely
The kind of poisonous love that has killed friendships before they have really begun
Friendships yes but none near as beautiful as this one. Foolish soul what have you done

Oh you foolish soul.
What have you done? You have interjected your poison and blacked out the sun
That solemn look across her perfect face; my heart now no longer beats, let alone like before does it race.
A broken heart No longer beats but spills ‘til empty blood bitter, no longer sweet and oh so empty mine has become
Since the empty startled look of this special one

Oh you foolish soul.
What have you done? By misguided choosing you have mistakenly covered the sun
With the use of ill-conceived words poorly thought through misspoken in time most undue you have mistakenly covered what was in your heart really true.
How can I explain what was really meant? How can I fix the mixed up message sent
If the hearer would be receptive yea listen to me yes only the hearing one could set these fixing words free

Oh you foolish soul.
What have you done? You my have lost you greatest friend by shutting out the sun.
A friend closer never had I. So close that without this one as a friend much of me would surely die.
Friendships this close happen once in one hundred years one like this can not only calm but remove your doubt and fear.
Oh foolish soul what have you done? You may have severed this friendship you fool destroying the sun!
Oh you foolish soul.


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