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authors get together, old or new, present their muse over world-wide the ports filled, items to review. Authors get together, old or new, browse around to create items on a way the ports filled, items to review learning the skills along, day by day. Browse around to create items on a way, celebrate birthday with new creation- learning the skills along, day by day; a party to tribute with great admiration. Celebrate birthday with new creation- present their muse over world-wide- a party to tribute with great admiration; really Writing.com is a wonderful site. written on 9/11/08 ---------------------------------------------------- Always waiting for tomorrow nobody likes to live in now; waiting for the future events ignoring the current presents. Every child waits to grow up; once grown, things so add up that when desires come along; extend the wait for a life-long. It seems that life spent more in waiting than in living for purpose or goal; that’s sad missing the freedom 'now' had. written on 9/19/08 4.5 stars -------------------- It’s time to wish summer a goodbye to settle with short days, nights high. Outdoor fun-beaches, picnics, rides enjoyable as they last, but the sides of the fall show with a chill in the air schools will start, supplies to prepare with the memories of the summer fun fall will be here as scheduled to run. written on 8/30/08 4.5 stars -------------------- Dreams don’t die But they do kindle the hope Life goes by measuring the viable scope. Dreams define goals Of life for a fulfillment A big deal To make an achievement Many tasks Can’t be accomplished Some reasons Difficult to dismissed. Dreams come true All the obstacles vanish His mercy Carries miracles afresh 3/7/3/7/ syllables Written on 10/9/08 ----------------------------------------------- Caring for family and home Always fulfilling each task Regardless how hard it maybe Even if it needs to stay up all night Even after working hard all day Recognize the profession here? written on 8/20/08 --------------------- Meaningful instructions Encouraging revisions Never insults a question Tries to help completion Of a work to satisfaction Respectable association. written on 7/22/08 Acrostic form 5 stars by 2 members on both and first place winners ----------------- There is no creative thread in selecting the username-Shaila. No special reasons either. That's the name given to me at my marriage by my in-laws. Per Indian tradition, not only woman's maiden surname changes at marriage but her first name also changes. Lately it doenn't happen that often but when I got married, some 45 years ago it was normal. Usually the husband changes the name as a part of the ceremony but in my case my husband knew me at work for fa few years before our marriage, and he was used to my name and had no inclination to change it but my in-laws, the traditionalists, wouldn't buy that and changed my first name too. Nobody but them only used that name to address me. It disappeared with them and remained only in my memory. Since I was trying something new by joining writing.com community, it just popped up in my mind and there it is -my username. With new name, I was hiding my identity and hoping to learn the new tricks in writing or presenting. I'm still learning and have no regrets about the name or not even thought about it until now. First place winner of Merit bage in a contest written on 3/25/10 Reviews with 5 stars: Interesting take on how you chose your user name.This has been fun and I have enjoyed reading all the reasons. Maretta -------------- Spelling/Gramma r I found no spelling errors. However, you have quite a few sentences that need commas to make them read more smoothly and to be grammatically correct. However, I would rather not focus on that right now. It is such a beautiful story. How well did you answer the question? You did a superb job of answering the question. You taught me a lot about your culture that I did not know. I can't imagine having to learn a new frist name when I got married. But traditions are often very good. I like that your husband had no interest in changing your name. Creativity Your name is creative in the fact that it is your own private little secret. No one knows you by that name except your husband and maybe a few relatives. You did a great job telling us about your name!
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