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Happy Birthday WDC
Created Pantoun for wdc b'day contest.+4
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written on 9/11/08
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Always waiting for tomorrow
nobody likes to live in now;
waiting for the future events
ignoring the current presents.

Every child waits to grow up;
once grown, things so add up
that when desires come along;
extend the wait for a life-long.

It seems that life spent more
in waiting than in living for
purpose or goal; that’s sad
missing the freedom 'now' had.

written on 9/19/08

4.5 stars
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It’s time to wish summer a goodbye
to settle with short days, nights high.
Outdoor fun-beaches, picnics, rides
enjoyable as they last, but the sides
of the fall show with a chill in the air
schools will start, supplies to prepare
with the memories of the summer fun
fall will be here as scheduled to run.

written on 8/30/08
4.5 stars
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Dreams don’t die
But they do kindle the hope
Life goes by
measuring the viable scope.

Dreams define goals
Of life for a fulfillment
A big deal
To make an achievement

Many tasks
Can’t be accomplished
Some reasons
Difficult to dismissed.

Dreams come true
All the obstacles vanish
His mercy
Carries miracles afresh

3/7/3/7/ syllables
Written on 10/9/08
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Caring for family and home
Always fulfilling each task
Regardless how hard it maybe
Even if it needs to stay up all night
Even after working hard all day
Recognize the profession here?

written on 8/20/08
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Meaningful instructions
Encouraging revisions
Never insults a question
Tries to help completion
Of a work to satisfaction
Respectable association.


written on 7/22/08
Acrostic form
5 stars by 2 members on both and first place winners
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There is no creative thread in selecting the username-Shaila. No special reasons either. That's the name given to me at my marriage by my in-laws. Per Indian tradition, not only woman's maiden surname changes at marriage but her first name also changes. Lately it doenn't happen that often but when I got married, some 45 years ago it was normal. Usually the husband changes the name as a part of the ceremony but in my case my husband knew me at work for fa few years before our marriage, and he was used to my name and had no inclination to change it but my in-laws, the traditionalists, wouldn't buy that and changed my first name too. Nobody but them only used that name to address me. It disappeared with them and remained only in my memory.
Since I was trying something new by joining writing.com community, it just popped up in my mind and there it is -my username. With new name, I was hiding my identity and hoping to learn the new tricks in writing or presenting.
I'm still learning and have no regrets about the name or not even thought about it until now.

First place winner of Merit bage in a contest
written on 3/25/10
Reviews with 5 stars:
Interesting take on how you chose your user name.This has been fun and I have enjoyed reading all the reasons.
Maretta
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Spelling/Gramma r
I found no spelling errors. However, you have quite a few sentences that need commas to make them read more smoothly and to be grammatically correct. However, I would rather not focus on that right now. It is such a beautiful story.

How well did you answer the question?
You did a superb job of answering the question. You taught me a lot about your culture that I did not know. I can't imagine having to learn a new frist name when I got married. But traditions are often very good. I like that your husband had no interest in changing your name.

Creativity
Your name is creative in the fact that it is your own private little secret. No one knows you by that name except your husband and maybe a few relatives. You did a great job telling us about your name!

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