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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> War >> ID #1474372  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Ravages of war (Re-edited)
A picture of a tear staining a soldiers face was the prompt used
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Bleeding soul’s essence from your eyes; tears.
Screaming echoes, wit’s homing slugs.
Winner, loser, matters not,
when the trigger sounds though,
mind shatters, eyes blur.
Collateral
damages:
soldiers'
smile...


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