Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Sponsored Items

Click Here To Bid  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Artistic
Presented To:
Anyea

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 445    
Guests: 433    

   
Total Online Now: 878    
Writing.Com Time

Tuesday
May 29, 2012
1:35pm EDT


  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Other >> ID #1481417  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
He looks nice today
This item is pretty powerful, speaks about abuse. Not a fluffy piece.
Rated:
E
by
Avg Rating: (15)
He looks nice today
Ironed shirt, shoes shined
Heads turn when he walks
He is aware of it
Preening

The blood, the pain, I need to move

Everyone always talks about
How fine he is, handsome
He was a real catch for me
All the girls want him
He knows

I tried to save you, I‘m sorry

His eyes are very blue
His smile is infectious
People stop to listen
When he talks
He likes that

I’m coming babies, I’m trying, I can't stop staring

He is very successful
Good at his profession
People ask him
For his opinion
He likes that

At the eyes, the poor one’s eyes, I’m sorry

He has another side
It’s very well hidden
And he smiles a lot
Very wide, just before
He doesn’t

I need to move, to clean the blood, I’m coming

He is very precise
And exacting
He doesn’t make errors
And never lets
Anyone else

I’m coming babies, I’ll get up

He’ll come back soon
He’ll expect everything
And he’ll be smiling
We all know the drill
He knows that

And I need to make sure his shirts are ironed.
© Copyright 2008 Irishkatie (UN: irishkatie at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Irishkatie has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!