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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Emotional >> ID #1485983  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Control Me
a poem I wrote when I felt like i just couldn't live up to what every one wanted me to be
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I want you to take me,

Break me,

Mold me,

Then make me,

Into something acceptable.

Not a bit rejectable.

One hundred-ten percent error free.

I wish you'd control me.
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