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Hope Floats
A review of Hope.
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Hope Floats
Not real enough to
Be captured in
Particles like water
Hope rises from the
Grasp of the atom



Hope floats because its substance
Is not dense enough
Not real enough to do elsewise




If hope floats,
What sinks into the depths of the Soul
Leaving Hope
Intangible and untouchable Hope
To remain a
Novel thought
To grasp when
Titanic has sunk
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