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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Dark >> ID #1489658  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
A Death in Retrospect
A person looking back on a memory of a funeral, the sensations and feelings remembered
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A dark humidity hung overhead
as I watched them coming home
from the funeral-
traces of death on their clothes.

                      When the front door opened
                      I could smell a cold finality
                      in the deep of her dress
                      in the folds.

There were speckles of damp on stiff black shirts,
And a glazed, moist, blur in the eyes of the grieving;
A pinched bend in the face.

                      How I pitied then much as they mourned-
                      Those hearts stained tepid with the lifeblood
                      of their brother-

The room a shadowy and morbid place.
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