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Obscure Demur
I woke inside iambic verse. The trees were gone and so much worse— the sky was dead and gone the sun, though light still kept the night undone. I walked upon the Poet’s form, and hoped to feel a thunderstorm. But all was still except a breeze which made me feel real ill at ease. I ran along a metered song, and thought the beat still somewhat wrong. Too strong to fit a pretty noun, until I turned it upside down. Music rhythm enters gently, thus I protest with this trochee. I know you think this poem obscure, but it is just my mere demur. It would not be so hard to see if it could just in verse be free.
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