Ar en Jei

A R  E N  J E I

If I died,
Would you cry?
Drop all your tears,
like rainfall from above?
Let it flow,
along the river that ends at the sea.

If I died,
Would you give me,
a pair of wings
that will fly me to the sky?
From above, I'll stare at you
and pray to God,

That I,
want you to forget me.
The one that adores you too much.
'Cause it hurts and kills me from inside.

If I died,
burn my corpse.
Spread the ashes all over the sea.
Then I'll swim,
deep down your heart,
and try to tell,

That I,
want you to be with
the one that cares for you so much.
Even that it hurts and kills me from inside.

If I died,
Would you live?
Or dare to kill yourself, die with me?
Would you?

Note:
Actually, i made this up as lyric for my ex-JRock band (not really 'mine', i just happen to be its keyboardist for some period).
What do you think?
Is it good enough or really bad?
Reviews are really... really... welcomed.