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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Experience >> ID #1506590  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
My Last Breath
The last breath we draw
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My breath was tight
My head felt light
I knew not what to do.
I would rather pray and wait.
For one last glance of you.

But as I faded far away
my hearing still intact.
I distinctly heard you say
"My darling, please come back!"

My soul had left without a trace
I earned my wings that day.
The last words imprinted on my mind
I never could erase.





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