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  >> Static Item >> Novel >> Crime/Gangster >> ID #1507089  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Thieves
The most feared thieves in the world are doublecrossed
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THIEVES



This story is about thieves. I've seen so many stories with them but these particular ones are off the grid.

They can steal anything, and barely without any equipment.



This group of 4, 2 women and 2 men, agree to help a man in a theft, because the man proves himself. Except when they go steal the things, the man dissapears and they have the curios object, a luminiscent rectangle with pale liquid in it.



Then things go really bad, they're on the run, some of them die in the first hit from almost every group in the world, the good or the bad, all ready to kill for this object. In their escape from these people, they're trying to figure out why its so important.

And when they know, they want to unleash its terrible power...





This story will have the grit, the action, and the baffling discoveries on the thing they stole. The blood will be there, and i hope to develop some interesting things. The world will be a fully sci-fi city, so as to find way's to tense up the thing. It will be a novel that occurs in maybe two days, and in those two days i hope to make sure you know the main characters are not quite the goodguys, and that the people pursuing them are driven by mad desire. No definate form of good and evil.



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