New Wine, New Bottle

Sweetest wine, with taste divine;.
aged to perfection.
In new glass, none from the past;
shiny reflection.
Fine bouquet, scent from heaven;
grape resurrection.

Copyright  © December 22, 2008 by Karen M. Crump

merlak gave me these as suggestions for change:

In new glass, none from the past;
shiny reflection.
Fine bouquet, scent from heaven;
aged to perfection
Sweetest wine, with taste divine;.
grape resurrection.

or

In new glass, none from the past;
aged to perfection
Fine bouquet, scent from heaven;
shiny reflection.
Sweetest wine, with taste divine;.
grape resurrection.

Mark 2:22  And no man putteth new wine into old bottles; else the new wine doeth burst the bottles, and the wine is spilled; and the bottles will be marred: but new wine must be put into new bottles.

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