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Adam & Eve
A simple poem about balance I wrote in one sitting.
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Adam, fruit of all creation,
Eve, wine of God’s love,
Combined, create the one,
The eternal loving seed of life,

Male, strong tree of the earth,
Female, beauteous flower of serenity,
Each interlocking with each other,
Making the whole of dream and reality,

Love, the free bird without boundaries,
Fear, the dream that prevents reality,
One can silently construct all,
As well can they prevent the other,

Law, the utopia we long for in unrest,
Chaos, the uncontrollable love of youth,
The sincere and true faces of all,
Yet, the masks of anonymous and unidentified,

Victory, the trial overcome by many,
Defeat, the road yet more are thrown onto,
Motivations driving us down a winding path,
E’en when the way is entirely shattered,

Adam, fruit of all creation,
Eve, wine of God’s love,
Combined immortalize one being,
One who defies all boundaries,

When only we subtly realize
We stood firm and united,
And balance kept us from anything,
Yet so, it granted everything,
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