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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #1511053  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
DID WE MAKE IT?
Gifting Trilogy Part II An Anniversary Poem July 14, 2004
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Hope alive! And Moving!
Will in Action!
Did we make it?
If it is today
We are here

If it is yesterday
We passed it
If it is tomorrow
We own it!
Did we make it?
Yes, we did
Still adoring
Still loving
Appreciating
We are still holding on

I look at your gray hair
And I love it
I look into you eyes and see
That my rounded body
Still stirs you
Beautiful hands, eyes and feet
Is what we see
All that we will ever see
This will carry us through
The dying part

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