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  >> Static Item >> Other >> Tragedy >> ID #1512408  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Probably During a Sunny Day
this was the finale version for judging. It still needs some work.
Rated:
E
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Avg Rating: (8)



Her sightless eyes cried remembrance at playful splashing.
A mother on the beach with shielded sun eyes gazed at every sound.
“Hunnie, Don’t play too far out.”
Her hearing gauged distance like a hawk finding prey.
Her head never turned away, not once.
It’s hard to hear a playful splash crashing beneath other sound waves.





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